Once, upon a time
I was yours and you were mine
Baby I thought we had it all
I don’t know why we had to fall
Apart
Remember those winter nights
Remember it feelin right
Down that long gravel road
Baby I thought we had a home
But we don’t
And I won’t forget
And I don’t regret
Maybe this love ain’t over yet
Who knows
I hear you already moved on
You’d think by now I’d be used to you bein gone
And now I’m stuck here being alone
Alone
And I won’t forget
And I don’t regret
Maybe this love ain’t over yet
Who knows
Once, upon a time..I was yours and you were mine
I like this one... I think the chorus might be stronger if you doubled it. As for the verses, the second is the strongest because it is rooted to an image... you might add a bit more furniture to the others.
ReplyDeleteAs an aside, this song blog is a really great idea... wish I'd thought of it. Enjoying your songs... keep up the good fight.