Friday, July 15, 2011

"Your Song"

Once, upon a time
I was yours and you were mine
Baby I thought we had it all
I don’t know why we had to fall
Apart

Remember those winter nights
Remember it feelin right
Down that long gravel road
Baby I thought we had a home
But we don’t

And I won’t forget
And I don’t regret
Maybe this love ain’t over yet
Who knows

I hear you already moved on
You’d think by now I’d be used to you bein gone
And now I’m stuck here being alone
Alone

And I won’t forget
And I don’t regret
Maybe this love ain’t over yet
Who knows

Once, upon a time..I was yours and you were mine

1 comment:

  1. I like this one... I think the chorus might be stronger if you doubled it. As for the verses, the second is the strongest because it is rooted to an image... you might add a bit more furniture to the others.

    As an aside, this song blog is a really great idea... wish I'd thought of it. Enjoying your songs... keep up the good fight.

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